Magazine Cover Second Draft

Audience Feedback

'The white line at the bottom is over lapping with the bar code with a noticeable line'

'Maybe make the picture bigger again, there's still a lot of blank space'

'The masthead could still be taller, just to stand out more'

'I like the sell lines, they frame the image well.'
'On the image there is a line from where the image was smaller and you reduced the opacity of the cloud effect, maybe get rid of it again on the image.'